Write an essay on personal matter involving values and beliefs that provide a purpose in our lives.
Introduction/Thesis Statement Excellent
Very well developed introduction & thesis statement. They engage the reader and create interest. They contain and/or introduce the process and state the author's point about the process. They also cover the whole process.
Body Paragraphs
Topic Sentences & Supporting Details Excellent
Each paragraph contains a clearly focused topic sentence that relates to the process being described.
Details in the essay are clear and specific, and there are enough details to help the reader see and understand all the steps of process. Concrete sense language is used effectively.
Conclusion Excellent
The concluding paragraph effectively unifies the essay. It makes a point about the process that is creative and interesting.