For one of them, tell me about one where the poem didn't have enough visual description for you to agree it was based on the inspirational picture. Did it connect in other ways, perhaps? For the other, tell me about one where the poet did a good job using visual language to help you "see" the painting.
Be specific--mention the exact words and phrases that made you (1) chose to say it was or was not good at evoking the visual inspiration, and (2) believe the description was more emotional than visual.
This is a challenging assignment, but you won't need to write several pages. Try to get 150-200 words for each poem.
Poem 1:
-First: Look at Vincent Van Gogh painting "The Starry Night" (1889)
-Read:
That does not keep me from having a terrible need of --shall i say the word--religion.
Then I go out at night to paint the starts.
-Vincent van Gogh in a letter to his brother
The town does not exist
except where one black-haired tree slips
up like a drowned woman into the hot sky.
the town is silent. The night boils with eleven stars
Oh starry night! This is how
I want to die.
It moves. they are all alive.
Even the moon bulges in its oragne irons
to push children, like a god, from its eye.
The old unseen serpent swallows up the stars.
Oh starry night! This is how
I want to die:
into that rushing beast of the night,
sucked up by that great dragon, to split
from my life with no flag,
no belly,
no cry.
Poem 2:
First: Look at Marcel Duchamp painting "Nude Descending a Staircase, No. 2" (1912)
Read: Nude Descending a staircase
Toe upon tow, a snowing flesh,
A gold of lemon, root and ring,
She sifts in sunlight down the stairs
With nothing on. Nor on her mind.
We spy beneath the banister
A constant thresh of thigh on thigh--
Her Lips imprint the swinging air
That parts to let her parts go by.
One-woman waterfall, she wears
Her slow descent like a long cape
And pausing, on the final stair
Collects her motions into shape.