Assignment task:
About When Mr Pirzada Come to Dine?
Focus & Cohesion
Provides a brief context for the essay in the introduction so that the reader understands what you will be writing about and why. Includes a strong controlling idea that makes an arguable assertion and answers the reader's question, "So what?"
Ideas & Support
Demonstrates understanding of the assignment and addresses the essay topic. Demonstrates understanding of the story/stories chosen and elements of fiction. Develops points with relevant and adequate information from the story/stories (and your own experience if relevant) to support your points as well as ample explanation of what this information means and how it supports your points. Makes well-stated, logical conclusions about the story/stories based on careful inferences.
Organization
Presents ideas in a clear order so that the reader can easily follow your analysis. Follows basic organization of an expository/argumentative essay: an introduction to the topic, a body that develops and supports the thesis, and a conclusion that brings the discussion to a close and leaves the reader with something to think about. Focuses paragraphs around clear points.