Eliminate similarities with other resources and makesure this report is ready to submit through originality/similarity check system that is called Turnitin. Also, since this is an investment report I want you to add on the followings: " clearly state what the intended plan is for Thailand (i.e. is it just a focus or do we plan on having a physical presence in the country & how will this move benefit the company). This needs to be included in the intro and will be supported with the country and industry evaluations.
Understand how UPS has expanded in the past, then I think we will know how we can imagine this expansion will be.
What is the intended purpose for the Thailand expansion (what will UPS gain from this action). Currently, UPS is partnered with Mailbox Etc. in Bangkok. Perhaps we should suggest developing a distribution center?
This would be a fueling or support center for the airport operations in Bangkok.