Problem:
Read this sentence: Keisha played "Moonlight Sonata" in the piano recital and her playing was good but not great. What is the best way to revise this sentence to be more specific without changing the meaning? a. Keisha played the marvelous "Moonlight Sonata" in the highly entertaining piano recital. b. Keisha's performance of "Moonlight Sonata" in the piano recital was acceptable, although not exceptional. c. The most acceptable execution of "Moonlight Sonata" in the piano recital was Keisha's effort. d. The most rehearsed selection in the piano recital was Keisha's useful rendition of "Moonlight Sonata."