Problem: What happens during the REVISING stage? What happens during the REVISING stage? The writer creates a list The writer looks over his or her capitalization The writer moves ideas around, puts them in different order, or adds information Revising is not part of the writing process. Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence? Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence? Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the the surface. And have a big mess to clean up. Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up. Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up. Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.