Problem
Complete the Student Paper activity on page 305 of Chapter 11. Read Xiaoyan's paper on pages 306 - 309 of Chapter 11 twice before providing feedback.
Answer each of the questions below:
i. What is the writer's thesis? Is the thesis clearly written?
ii. Examine the body paragraphs. Are the main ideas effectively supported with evidence? Do you think the student uses too much personal experience or opinions and not enough research?
iii. Examine the use of quotations and summaries. Does the writer use quotes and summaries effectively?
iv. What do you think are the most effective aspects of the essay?
v. Are there any parts of the essay that can be improved?