Revising Paragraphs with Circular Reasoning
Paragraph 1: The percentage of Americans who shop online is growing for a number of reasons. People are buying a lot of items from Internet sites. All ages of people shop online, so online shopping will only increase.
Paragraph 2: Having a summer job teaches adolescents some valuable life lessons. There are many situations that students will experience through a summer job that will help them navigate the adult world. So students should try to get some work knowledge before graduating.