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Last week my family members, whom live all across the United States, came together to enjoy a thanksgiving meal. We ate turkey, yams and cranberry sauce, and, for desert, we enjoyed pumpkin pie, that complimented the meal. Afterward, I challenged my cousins to a game, the winners were them. Next, we prepared some holiday cards to send to our friends. The cards featured a heard of mooses, and we signed them: "Happy holidays from the Robbins'.'
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Last week, my family members who live across the United states came together to enjoy a thanksgiving meal. We ate turkey, yams, and cranberry sauce. For desert we enjoyed pumpkin pie as meal compliments. Afterward, I challenged my cousins to a game and they won. Next, we prepared some holiday cards to send to our friends. The cards featured a heard of moose that we signed, "Happy holidays from the Robbins".
Okay so this is what course hero is giving me as an answer but isn't Thanksgiving supposed to be capitalized and desert turned into dessert? Im so confused. i really need a good grad on this edit to pass the class. Please help