The Brookdale Foundation has an outstanding reputation as a generous institution caring for and improving the lives of the elderly and the most vulnerable among us. I would like to respectfully request your permission to submit a proposal for City meals-on Wheels. We provide a continuous lifeline of nutritious food and human company to homebound elderly New Yorkers in need, helping them to live with dignity in their own familiar homes and communities. I am suggesting the Brookdale Foundation consider funding for our Mobile Food Pantry program. The mobile Food Pantry delivers supplemental non-perishable food to seniors who are currently surviving on just one meal a day.
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