We have to proofread sentences for inconsistent tense and person. We also have to check for faulty parallelism.sentences, but I'm stuck with 3 of them. She said one of the sentences is already correct, so I think that's what's throwing me off.
These are the 3 sentences:
1 ) I like everything about Lamont: his natural good looks, his witty conversational style, and reading his short stories.
2 ) Thomas is moving to Cleveland for graduate school and because of his girlfriend.
3 ) Paula spent two years in the army and then she went to college.