Paper Title: Language and Technology in Voice-Recognition Systems
Topic Development, Focus/Thesis Statement
Paper Goals: The role of language and technology in voice-recognition and/or voice-production software The role of language and technology in education The role of language and technology in health care Ethical problems of language technology
you will find a revision plan along with margin comments within your paper. Use my suggestions as a starting point for the revision process. Also, please note that I have not edited or proofread the entire draft for minor errors, but rather, focused on overall concerns such as idea development. For a complete look at your grammar and punctuation, please use the Grammarly software available under "Writing Center" in your classroom.
You have done a nice job writing about this complex subject. You have performed extensive research and you have compiled it into a narrative.
For your revisions, I suggest focusing on:
1. Thesis Statement
2. Organization
3. References
4. Mechanics
I recommend that you create a thesis statement and place it near the beginning of the paper. Typically it is good to place the thesis statement at the end of an introduction paragraph. The thesis statement should present the purpose of the research paper and then list the key points that will be used to support the purpose.
Be careful to fully develop each topic paragraph. Many of your paragraphs are short, but they are related to previous paragraphs. Be sure to group related topic statements together into the same paragraph.
Be careful to format the reference detail per the APA style.
No. of Pages: 8-10 pages
Paper Style: APA
Attachment:- Final Paper.pdf