Please help review this essay
1. Is the information easy to follow? Is the chain of events of sequence of steps logically arranged? How could the essay's organization be improved?
2. Could the text be enhanced by the use of appropriate visual aids? How? Why are the current visual aids effective or ineffective? What other visual aids would be more effective? [Make sure you understand what visual aids are - they are not necessarily photos. Visual aids are numbered steps, bullet points, bold, headings, etc.].
3. Are the instructions complete - what detail/step is missing? Where do you feel you would like more details or explanation? Where do you need less?
4. Are hazards clearly stated with the help of warnings? Why are the warnings effective or ineffective? Are any important hazards missing - which ones?
5. Do you find any parts unclear, confusing, or undeveloped? List each such spot. Then write a note to the writer with questions and comments about the parts you have noticed.
6. Give the writer one suggestion (that you have not mentioned yet) about a change that you think would improve the draft.
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