In Mike Rose's essay entitled "Blue-Collar Brilliance, "he asserts that having a blue-collar job does not make people any less intelligent than the ones THAT have a formal education.
In this sentence I was told that I should use the word WHO instead of THAT. I have to correct the sentence and also give a grammar rule why.
#2 Society needs to accept that continuing education is the best for some; whereas; for others their workplaces will give them the best opportunities to learn.
In this sentence I was told that I should put a comma after OTHERS. I have to correct the sentence and also give a grammar rule why.