Assignment:
1) Get rid of words like moreover, thus, therefore, may, fairly, additionally, etc
2) "The case scenario of one of the United States hospitals that were hacked, thus affecting a hospital's activities for a week, is an excellent educational campaign awareness." add examples to support this statement
3) "The website prevents access to fake websites and websites harboring malware." - this statement is vague- which/what website?
4) In the "Filtering of Suspicious Content" subheading 'Blacklists' word is used, before using such words explain what they mean so, explain what is a blacklist.
5) Under "Importance of Cybersecurity" subheading 'Professionals who have pursued master's in health informatics .. ' - instead of health informatics use something related to cybersecurity, add more intext citations.
6) "Health insurance portability and accountability act rules (HIPAA)"- make this subheading and add how cybersecurity enforces HIPAA, add intext citations.
7) "Large health organizations have fairly robust cybersecurity in the health programs to ... " this statement is vague.
8) In "Health Information System" subheading add more evidence and in-text citations.
9) "Strategies for Improving Cybersecurity in Health Facilities" change this subheading - sounds like am suggesting strategies. - add more intext citations.
10) In "Ways to Identify Malware Attack" subheading - add more intext citations.
11) In "Types of Malware" subheading - add more intext citations.
12) Add more support, examples, and evidence to the paper.
13) The entire paper is lacking in-text citations. Make sure to add more in-text citations.
14) Add conclusion