Homework: Thesis
Instructions
Read each person's Chapter twice. In the first reading, just get the feel of the essay's organization and points-make large-scale comments if they occur to you as you read.
In the second reading, start to fine-tune your feedback. Make comments on the draft, and then write some feedback on this sheet (use complete sentences and be as thorough as you can).
Task:
a. Do you have any concerns about the writer's submission?
b. From the findings, are you able to identify the problem? Solution - if any? Explain.
c. Organization and transitions: Look through the essay and take note of the way the writer moves from point to point, from one paragraph to the next. Do major ideas seem to be organized in a logical way?
d. Support: Identify any areas in the essay that seem to need greater support in concrete evidence or more explanation. Also, point out places where the writer needs to clarify how the evidence given. supports the argument.
Format your homework according to the give formatting requirements:
a. The answer must be double spaced, typed, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides.
b. The response also includes a cover page containing the title of the homework, the course title, the student's name, and the date. The cover page is not included in the required page length.
c. Also include a reference page. The references and Citations should follow APA format. The reference page is not included in the required page length.