Paper Revision_URGENT
I have a paper that i purchased from up here that is in great need of a makeover so that i may pass this class here is the feedback from the professor:
Please skim through and make sure to edit out ALL first and second person. Also, since you are juggling so many sources in this paper, it is imperative that you create a signal tag and ending citation for each source. I must be able to clearly locate all 5 outside sources in your paper and see how they aide the development of your essay.
Also when this paper was done only three sources are cited so the paper needs two more