In The Purity Myth, Jessica Valenti argues that, today, "[t]he most desirable women aren't women at all: they're girls." Where do you see this phenomenon (either girls portrayed in adult or "sexy" ways or grown women portrayed as girls to be seen as sexy)? How would you compare the sexualization of girls today with the kind of gender expectations Shakespeare represents in Romeo and Juliet or Satrapi depicts in Persepolis?
I wrote an essay, one page.
Could you check for grammar, usuage, sentence structure. and can you check if it sounds right and answering the questions right.