Assignment task:
Could someone help me structure the rest of the paragraph from the issues listed below? I don't know how to put them in a good academic paragraph. Feel free to correct the first few sentences as well. Thanks.
Games and sports are essential for children's development, whether for fun or competition. Children participate in sports for various reasons, including improving physical fitness, promoting mental well-being, enhancing social interactions, and developing life skills. However, there are issues
- Surrounding the age and gender of young children involved in the formal or informal sport
- Whether they should be playing organized or competitive sport
- The financial, emotional, or social barriers from family that prevent them from participating in sports