ESSAY ASSIGNMENT: TELEHEALTH
PEER ESSAY: HIV
Using the questions below as a guide, write a response:
• When you read your peer's essay, did you find yourself comparing your essay to the essay you were reading? What similarities or differences did you notice? How did the approaches compare?
• During the review process, did you come across any ideas for changes you wanted to make to your own essay? If so, provide examples.
• Use the peer-review worksheet and try to answer the questions about your own essay. What areas may need to be revised? What strengths do you see in this draft?
Signature Essay Peer Review Worksheet
For this assignment, your objective is to provide high-level feedback to one of your fellow classmates that will help to improve her or his final essay. Completely fill out each question in this worksheet to help your fellow student.
First, in three to five sentences, summarize the overall argument addressed in this essay as well as how well you think this draft meets the assignment requirements listed in the Signature Assignment Instructions.
Next, answer each of the following questions using complete sentences, addressing each question in its entirety, and providing specific examples when possible.
Remember that you can give both positive and negative answers to help highlight the best aspects of the essay and those areas that need revision.
Content-Specific Questions
• Can you identify the main argument being discussed?
• Can you identify the thesis statement? Does it address the main points that the writer will be making in the essay?
• At any point in the essay, can you identify the author's opinion on the controversy? If so, can you address where the bias is revealed?
• Are the arguments for both sides equally addressed?
Organization
• How effectively does the introduction engage the reader while providing an overview of the main argument?
• Can you identify the topic sentences for each body paragraph? Be sure to list any body paragraphs that do not appear to have topic sentences.
• Does the paper effectively use transitions? Be sure to point out any areas where a topic shift occurs that seems to be abrupt.
• Is the conclusion effective? Does it summarize the main points and bring the discussion to a logical and satisfying ending?
Format
• Does the essay use appropriate APA formatting, including double-spacing, Times New Roman, 12-point font, 1" margins, and appropriate paragraph indentations?
• Can you identify any areas where outside sources appear to be used without including in-text citations? Provide specific examples here.
• When in-text citations are used, do they follow APA formatting?
• Does the essay include the required eight sources?
• Can you identify any issues with the reference page? If so, please provide specific examples,
Grammar and Mechanics
• Does the writer use proper grammar, punctuation, and spelling? If not, please provide examples of errors in need of correction.
• Is the writing clear and comprehensible throughout the draft? If not, please provide examples in need of improvement.
Three strengths of this version of this essay are:
Three aspects of this essay to work on before final submission are:
Format your assignment according to the following formatting requirements:
1. The answer should be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides.
2. The response also include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student's name, the course title, and the date. The cover page is not included in the required page length.
3. Also Include a reference page. The Citations and references should follow APA format. The reference page is not included in the required page length.
Attachment:- HIV-ROUGH-PAPER.rar