Problem
It has a vast living room. Debby took a seat, and Brad unlocked a door that led to a gloomy room. As they entered the dark area, everyone laughed. Debby hesitated at the door, unsure whether they should enter. As soon as Brad got ahold of Debby's hand, he dragged her inside. Many varied objects were scattered about the room. Kathy wore a choker necklace with a rustic pendant while Tom was absorbed ina journal. Debby picked up a cube puzzle. She began to fiddle with it, spinning it around. Brad's face lit up with a grin as he went upstairs. Debby put down the puzzle and returned to the second floor.
It was becoming late, and Brad advised that everyone get to bed. After Debby got home, she laid on her bed. She was just about to nod off when she heard her door bang. Afraid, she retreated to her bed. Debby sat there in disbelief as a chill air seeped in through the window. Debby heard a banging and glanced out the window to see a stranger. A guy with peeling skin, grasping the same missing jigsaw piece from down below. His head was protruding with swords and knives. When Debby began screaming, no one came to check on her. In the blink of an eye, the beast was inside the room. Brad sprinted through the opening and bonked the door on the side with his shoulder. Shouting for Debby to come with him. Running away, Brad revealed the tragic news that Tom and Kathy had been murdered. Brad invited her here, saying he's been stuck in the game for nearly twenty years and that this is the only way out. Debby, who was perplexed by his behavior, refused to descend with him. Brad grabbed her and said that was their last chance of survival. What did Debby end up doing? Will we ever find out?
How can I revise this story and create more action?