Look at the comments made on the paper that was drafted and assist with the corrections to make it flow better.
Given the Paper is : "Improvements to Increase the Quality of Healthcare"
Comments are:
Okay, did you do an outline? If not, I would suggest the following:
• Figure out what key points you want to cover in this paper
• then make headings for those points
• then look through all of your sentences and move them around under the appropriate heading
• then organize those sentences under the heading into paragraphs
• make sure that you do not plagiarize
• make sure that you cite properly
Attachment:- Improvements to increase the quality of healthcare (academic essay) 2 VLD 9.1.16.rar