Given the link of an video.
"Murder on a Sunday Morning on youtube."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wWwf-uHrCIA
Attached is an essay on that video.
Read the essay and comments. and fix the essay.
Overall comments are:
a. I see your effort but this needs work
b. The two-paragraph summary must be very strong - identifying the purpose of the document, the setting (where it took place), the important players and other important aspects to constitute a strong summary
c. Review for spelling and grammar
d. This is 3 ½ pages not four - the minimum is four pages so I need to see a full fourth page
e. You need to spend more time engaging the reader on the 3rd degree to psychological shift - also establishing that some forms of 3rd degree still exists - example terrorists.
You need to establish the importance of the interrogation process (do some more research - google scholar)
Attachment:- Draft comments.rar