Response to the following:
Do you just need the essay proofread for proper grammar, spelling, etc., and then revised to correct all errors?
At the end of part 1, you have: "Specially because I understand......" in purple; do you need this sentence finished? If so, what information do you need there?
Do you want the essay to remain in the same format with titles of different sections in 'bold' and separated from the other sections?