A Rewarding Occupation
(1) For some people, a job is merely a source of income and nothing more.
(2) They really don't care about what work they do, as long as they receive a paycheck.
(3) For others, they view a job as the path that will allow them to change the world.
(4) They find their work rewarding because of the good that they can do.
(5) The perfect example of such a rewarding occupation is that of a doctor.
(6) Doctors are greatly dedicated to the people that they help as indicated by their willingness to go through many years of schooling.
(7) A comprehensive education is required so that physicians will be prepared for every medical issue that comes their way.
(8) As technical knowledge constantly changes, so does the scope of what a doctor needs to know, so their education continues well beyond graduation.
(9) No matter what specialization doctors have, they do what they can to help improve and maintain the health of their patients.
(10) Doctors manage the physical, mental, and emotional well-being of patients in every stage of development.
(11) Some doctors treat patients of all ages, as they have more general practices.
(12) For example, pediatricians treat babies, young children, and young adults.
(13) Podiatrists specialize in the workings of a person's foot.
(14) Cardiologists treat patient's hearts.
(15) The world is a better place because of the dedication of doctors to their field.
(16) They show how much they care through their willingness to continually educate themselves, so they can make the world a healthier place.
Which of the following is the most effective way to improve the organization of the selection?