Problem
Instructions
Revise the introductory paragraph for a process essay. Revise the hook by combining sentences so that the ideas connect better. Change informal expressions, such as "lots of" and avoid repeating the same words. Include a thesis statement that indicates this essay is a process essay, and include the thesis in the correct place in the paragraph.
Rewrite the entire revised introductory paragraph in the space below. Do not write more than a paragraph or you will lose points.
How to Throw a Good Party
Every year, lots of people have lots of things to celebrate. People get together and enjoy some quality time. To celebrate certain events, people frequently throw some kind of a party. They invite friends and family members to celebrate with them. Some people don't like to plan parties because they think that planning a party is difficult. However, good parties can be easy to plan. You will host a good party.