In this task you have been provided with an anonymous student paper to review. You are to assess and analyze the paper by answering the questions provided. You are to explain, elaborate and provide examples where appropriate.
The Question:
1. Essay Organization (structure)
Introduction
- Has the author defined the topic?
- Has the author establish the essay topic background?
- Has the author clarified the intention of the essay/provide a ‘roadmap'.
Paragraph
- Are there any paragraphs that are poorly structured? Choose one and explain how it might be clarified and/or better supported.
Conclusion
- Is the conclusion clear? Does it effectively sum up the essay topic without introducing new ideas? Does it leave you with a sense of the importance or usefulness of the paper?
2. Essay Content
Question 1
- Does the author clearly state that there is no link between autism and MMR?
- Did the author provide evidence from credible and peer reviewed sources as evidence to identify that there was no link between autism and MMR vaccinations? Discuss.
Question 2
- Discuss how effectively the author addressed how the anti-vaccination movement used Miss-information to support their campaign? What examples were used?
- From your own additional readings - What additional information could they have included?
Question 3
- Discuss if the author identified why information provided to the public should be based on valid research? (credible information -rather than biased, incorrect or subjective information)
- From your own additional readings - What additional information could they have included?
3. Credible Information
For each reference -
- Identify if each reference is legitimate? (e.g. can you access the online references?)
- Identify if each reference is credible? Explain why/why not.
Provide a short paragraph to summarise the author's use of credible references to support their
claims/discussions.
4. Referencing:
In text referencing:
- Choose three intext citations to evaluate.
- Discuss if the in-text citations were referenced correctly? Explain your response.
Final Reference list
Using a table:
Cut and paste Reference Label if correct/incorrect Label if correct/incorrect
- In one column cut and paste each reference.
- In the second column label if correct or incorrect
- In the last column place the corrected reference
5. Presentation:
- Did the author comply with APA 6 formatting guidelines? Explain using evidence to support your claims.
- Provide a table as below to oragnise your answer. Reference the sources that you used to identify and correct the formatting errors.
Correct formatting
(A separate line for each component) How the student has formatted the paper
6. Written expression and style:
Examine and comment on the academic language used within the essay. (e.g. informal and formal language, person perspective)
- Provide three sentences from the essay as examples of writing tone or style. Analyse and discuss why you have chosen each example.
- What was your least favourite (or most confusing) sentence and why?
Attachment:- WHY CHILDREN SHOULD BE VACCINATED.rar