Problem: Support learning of the following module objectives about Describing proofreading techniques allowing writers to catch errors in both routine and complex business documents.
Use that knowledge to consider the case of Taylor, who is serving as interim editor of the company newsletter. She receives an article written by the company president describing, in abstract and pompous language, the company's goals for the coming year. Taylor believes the article will need considerable revising to be readable. Attached to the president's article are complimentary comments by two of the company vice presidents.
What action should Taylor take?
Why does Taylor believe the article needs significant revising?
Provide specific details that demonstrate the importance of revising & editing.