Could you please check my grammar (It is extremely essential!) and correct some awkward sentences? My first language is not English ,and it is my first time write a magazine style rather than academic style paper, so I think there are a lot needs to be corrected. Feel free to change any sentences you feel awkward and can be written in a better way. Thank you
A 400 word story about a turning point in someone's life that related to my issue ( my issue is "body image")
Requirements:
-Includes at least one quote
-Italics the sentence of the actual turning point
-The turning point is something that happened to them personally as opposed to a turning point in the history of the issue itself
-Free of gramma errors and typos