Assignment Task: Dear Alumni,
[1] Please visit our alumni relations website and complete a brief survey to make planning events easier.
[2] We are reviewing our format for alumni networking events in your area and want to hear your ideas.
[3] The main reason we are looking to gather your feedback is the fact that we've received negative feedback on past events.
[4] Unhappy alumni don't contribute, so we are looking for ways to make you feel engaged and connected to the school.
[5] When you feel connected and meet up with alumni in your area, there is a sense of community that benefits everyone, especially our college alumni fund.
[6] Thanks in advance for helping to make our programs more successful.
Sincerely,
Edna Tisdale, Assistant Director
College Alumni Relations
What advice should you give Edna as she revises sentence 5 of her message to the alumni?
O Highlight the potential benefit of increased donations.
O Remove the section on community benefit.
O Don't mention the fundraising aspect.