Discussion
Respond to Peers: Respond to at least two of your classmates. Respond to one classmate who used a different revision technique than you did and one who used a similar revision technique. In each response:
•Compare the resources and techniques you used for revision to those your classmate used.
•Make one concrete suggestion about how the revision sample can be further improved.
Do not comment on grammar or stylistics-just content. Response posts must be 125 to 200 words in length
Ok so i have download my revision checklist of a personal essay i have writen i have also downloaded 2 classmates discussion Kristen and simone i need u to respond back to there discussion write the responds as you where talking to them needs to 125 to 200 words in lenght to each person. i have also downloaded there revision checklist for kristen and simone there revision checklist goes with there discussion.