the comments from a teacher;
Please reread for any spelling or grammar errors or just typing errors. For example on slide 3 you have sstudent instead of student.
Can you add in some examples of his work or things in his stylie of work? On the last slide you say he wore a silk knotted about neck, can you show that or the patched clothing?
Make it clear with a final slide what his contribution was. His influence on _________ remains today because _________. Or His name contributed to the art community by coming up with ___________________