In your discussion post, please explain:
- Does the topic sentence appropriate and provide enough detail? If applicable, explain how you would improve the topic sentence.
- Are the supporting details on topic and specific? If applicable, explain how you would improve the supporting sentences.
- Does the concluding sentence sum up the entire paragraph? If applicable, explain how you would improve the concluding sentence.
- Are there any changes in the paragraph that you would make in word choice or punctuation?
- Explain what you think are the strengths of the paragraph.
- Explain what you think are the weaknesses of the paragraph.